Saturday, December 10, 2011

For all teenagers. What do you think of my writing?

Question by Tarek: For all teenagers. What do you think of my writing?
Ethan ran into the living room with kelvin behind him, carrying the smashed cake.

" Mr. Gustave...," Kelvin yelled from the middle of the living room.

Ethan elbowed Kelvin. ‘Don’t make a scene,"

“What, happened?" Mrs Gustave came running out of the kitchen, “for god's sake, are you ok?"

She examined Ethan. “why are you yelling Kelvin?"

“It’s Ethan," He said, " something strange happened on our way home,

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